doc-el commit 939:e7b7d10ac3ba - Minor wording tweaks in section...

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changeset:      939:e7b7d10ac3ba
user:           Manolis Kiagias <sonicy at otenet.gr>
date:           2008-10-21 16:16 +0300
details:        http://hg.hellug.gr/freebsd/doc-el/?cmd=changeset;node=e7b7d10ac3ba

description:
	Minor wording tweaks in section 24.2 (cutting-edge)

diffs (49 lines):

diff -r bed6264eb38d -r e7b7d10ac3ba el_GR.ISO8859-7/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
--- a/el_GR.ISO8859-7/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml	Tue Oct 21 15:10:50 2008 +0300
+++ b/el_GR.ISO8859-7/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml	Tue Oct 21 16:16:31 2008 +0300
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
       ãéá ôï &os.current; êáé Ýðåéôá ãéá ôï &os.stable;.</para>
 
     <sect2 id="current">
-      <title>Ðáñáêïëïõèþíôáò ôï Current óôï &os;</title>
+      <title>Ðáñáêïëïõèþíôáò ôï &os.current;</title>
 
       <para>Êáèþò äéáâÜæåôå áõôü ôï êåßìåíï, íá Ý÷åôå õðüøéí óáò üôé ôï
 	&os.current; åßíáé ðñÜãìáôé ç <quote>êüøç ôïõ îõñáöéïý</quote> óôçí
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
 	  </listitem>
 
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>ÌÝëç ôçò êïéíüôçôáò ôïõ &os; ðïõ åßíáé åíåñãïß äïêéìáóôÝò
+	    <para>ÌÝëç ôçò êïéíüôçôáò ôïõ &os; ðïõ åßíáé åíåñãïß testers
 	      êáé åßíáé ðñüèõìïé íá áíáëþóïõí ôï ÷ñüíï ôïõò ãéá íá ëýóïõí
 	      ðñïâëÞìáôá, þóôå íá åîáóöáëßóïõí üôé ôï &os.current;
 	      èá ðáñáìåßíåé üóï ôï äõíáôüí ðéï óùóôü.  ÓõíÞèùò, ôá ìÝëç áõôÜ
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@
 	      êáé ðëçñïöïñßåò ãéá ðéèáíÝò ðáñåíÝñãåéåò ðïõ ìðïñåß íá
 	      Ý÷åé.</para>
 
-	    <para>Ãéá íá ãñáöôåßôå óå áõôÝò, Þ óå ïðïéåóäÞðïôå Üëëåò áðü ôéò
+	    <para>Ãéá íá ãñáöôåßôå óå áõôÝò, Þ óå ïðïéåóäÞðïôå áðü ôéò
 	      õðÜñ÷ïõóåò ëßóôåò, åðéóêåöèåßôå ôçí ôïðïèåóßá
 	      &a.mailman.lists.link; êáé åðéëÝîôå ôç ëßóôá óôçí ïðïßá èÝëåôå
 	      íá ãßíåôå óõíäñïìçôÞò.  Ïäçãßåò ãéá ôçí õðüëïéðç äéáäéêáóßá
@@ -297,8 +297,7 @@
 		  ðåñéóóüôåñï ôçí ðéèáíüôçôá íá ìç äïõëåýåé óùóôÜ ãéá ìåãÜëá
 		  ÷ñïíéêÜ äéáóôÞìáôá.  Óáò óõíéóôïýìå íá ÷ñçóéìïðïéÞóåôå ôï
 		  <application><link linkend="cvsup">CVSup</link></application>
-		  áí ôï modem óáò åßíáé ôá÷ýôçôáò 9600&nbsp;bps Þ
-		  ôá÷ýôåñï.</para>
+		  áí äéáèÝôåôå modem 9600&nbsp;bps Þ ôá÷ýôåñï.</para>
 	      </listitem>
 	    </orderedlist>
 	  </listitem>
@@ -425,7 +424,7 @@
 	      êáé ðëçñïöïñßåò ãéá ðéèáíÝò ðáñåíÝñãåéåò ðïõ ìðïñåß íá
 	      Ý÷åé.</para>
 
-	    <para>Ãéá íá ãñáöôåßôå óå áõôÝò, Þ óå ïðïéåóäÞðïôå Üëëåò áðü ôéò
+	    <para>Ãéá íá ãñáöôåßôå óå áõôÝò, Þ óå ïðïéåóäÞðïôå áðü ôéò
 	      õðÜñ÷ïõóåò ëßóôåò, åðéóêåöèåßôå ôçí ôïðïèåóßá
 	      &a.mailman.lists.link; êáé åðéëÝîôå ôç ëßóôá óôçí ïðïßá èÝëåôå
 	      íá ãßíåôå óõíäñïìçôÞò.  Ïäçãßåò ãéá ôçí õðüëïéðç äéáäéêáóßá