doc-el commit 982:c94dad8d2a58 - Revised the en_US patch for 'cu...

[freebsd-doc-el at lists.hellug.gr]

changeset: 982:c94dad8d2a58
user:      Manolis Kiagias <sonicy at otenet.gr>
date:      2008-10-30 23:56 +0200
details:   http://hg.hellug.gr/freebsd/doc-el/?cmd=changeset;node=c94dad8d2a58

description:
	Revised the en_US patch for 'cutting-edge'

diffstat:

1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml |   23 +++++++++-----

diffs (64 lines):

diff -r 475439fc74e1 -r c94dad8d2a58 en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml	Thu Oct 30 11:30:56 2008 +0200
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml	Thu Oct 30 23:56:01 2008 +0200
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 	used to obtain and update &os; sources.  To use it, you will need to
 	install a port or package like <filename
 	  role="package">net/cvsup-without-gui</filename>.  If you are using
-	&os;&nbsp;6.0-RELEASE or later, you may wish to substitute this
+	&os;&nbsp;6.2-RELEASE or later, you may wish to substitute this
 	with &man.csup.1;, which is now part of the base system.</para>
     </note>
   </sect1>
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
 	</indexterm>
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
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+	    <para>Join the &a.current.name; and the &a.svn-src-head.name; lists.  This is not
 	      just a good idea, it is <emphasis>essential</emphasis>.  If
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 	      you will not see the comments that people are
@@ -210,14 +210,16 @@
 	      will miss out on important bulletins which may be critical
 	      to your system's continued health.</para>
 
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@@ -396,14 +398,19 @@
 	      respond if they have any issues to raise concerning the
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